“The Catechism of Emily Pry” Writer’s Digest Book Review

Structure, Organization, Pacing:

This book is exemplary in its structure, organization, and pacing. The structure of the chapters/parts aid in a compelling organization of the story or information. The pacing is even throughout and matches the tone/genre of the book. Additional reader commentary related to Structure, Organization, Pacing: The start of the book gives us the child around which the story grows. With the mystery and her actions as she searches for her mother, and two reporters looking for a story, the pacing rushes along.

Spelling, Punctuation, Grammar:

This book has spelling, punctuation, and grammar corresponding with the region of the world from which the author hails (ex. British English or American English) or with where the book is set (including slang, vernacular, or dialect). These choices are intentional and implemented consistently throughout with few, if any, errors.

Production Quality and Cover Design:

This book is exemplary in production quality and cover design. The physical materials, printing, and binding are of professional quality and traditional industry standards. The typesetting and page layout (including illustrations, images, or figures) are easy to follow, thoughtfully designed, and error free. The cover appears to be professionally designed and is compellingly related to the content/genre of the book. The gray cover and the feet in pink sneakers are as bold as the title. The pink sneakers are important to the plot. The back cover has a short blurb and the author’s bio.

Plot, Story, or Topic Appeal:

This book is satisfactory in its choice of topic or theme for the story. It has some unique elements and will appeal to many readers in its intended genre. Having the main character an eleven-year-old girl living at a Catholic home quickly turns into a mystery with many threads that move from character to character. The persistence of drinking and the secrets among church people, might not appeal to all readers.

Character Appeal and Development:

This book is exemplary in character appeal (or interest) and development. All main characters (including antagonists) are unique and fully fleshed out with compelling, layered motivations and traits. Secondary characters are unique and have a meaningful purpose.

Additional reader commentary:

A lawyer, first described as an enemy, wins over another when he says “I know the difference between a guilty man and one that feels shame. One is…hiding the truth, the other afraid the truth won’t be found.’ Another thinks ‘She had good intentions. The path to hell was paved with them.’ The troubles among the many characters keep the book interesting.

Voice and Writing Style:

This book is exemplary in its voice and writing style. It has a unique voice, and the writing style is consistent throughout. The style and tone are also consistent with or will appeal to readers of the intended genre.

On pg. 27 the author uses a recognizable passage ‘Better to beg forgiveness then ask for permission.’ Imagery moves the reader such as on pg. 61: ‘The car was black, inside and out, cuffing her in darkness that struck obvious fear in her eyes.’ Another is questioned about ‘…applying Murphy’s Law.’

Please share things that readers will find compelling about this book and why: I like that this is set mainly in 1964. The cars described and the characters and their jobs throughout ooze with historical natures.